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Times Eternal Hall:
Soft reflections buoy against times eternal halls, Filled with broken laughter from within decaying walls. Stones of white, Which cry out into the silent winter night Replete with full moons glow, And whispering prostrate priest Face down in gypsum snow. Seeking shadows In reflecting times Harking unto the song dead men sing waiting for hope from life's eternal spring. As tears of madness With neon legs crawl, Across oblivion And down times Eternal hall. J. Allen Wilson © 2004
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill | 11/27/2004 |
| Powerful, my friend!!! You have the touch to capture the reader and keep him/her riveted to the end. EXCELLENT!! ~Linda |
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| Reviewed by Eileen Tiger Lily | 11/26/2004 |
| J Allen this is an incredible poem! Your work has been so strong with deeply moving themes lately. Really fantastic! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford | 11/26/2004 |
| Fantastic write! | |
| Reviewed by Robert Jude(Ace) Forese | 11/26/2004 |
| once within the depths of darkness we have no choice but to see the glimmer of light ahead ... | |
| Reviewed by Ed Matlack | 11/26/2004 |
| Gives me the shivers this does...kinda scary with a whisp of madness and death...hope you find peace, Ed & Rufuz | |
| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson | 11/26/2004 |
| wow. stark images, a mystical flavor and emotional impact. all in one poem. really good. Dawn | |
| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson | 11/26/2004 |
| this sighing, crying home this image and the poignant thoughts as those remaining shared the pumpkin bread both really hit home for me. A Happy Thanksgiving and a blessed Advent season to you and yours, Allen. |
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| Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger | 11/26/2004 |
| Allen, a tightly woven poetic meal, from a thankful heart and soul for the memories shared, my friend. An outstanding emotive write. I hope you and yours, enjoyed a wonderful Thanksgiving. Thanks for sharing this slice of your life. Take good care and be well. | |
| Reviewed by Susan Barton | 11/26/2004 |
| you speak truth! | |
| Reviewed by Robert Jude(Ace) Forese | 11/25/2004 |
| i like the metaphor of pumpkin bread as the sweet memories we once feasted on ... | |
| Reviewed by Ed Matlack | 11/25/2004 |
| As will we all, Al, as will we all, nice though sad...Ed & Rufuz | |
| Reviewed by Lady Peg | 11/24/2004 |
| Happy Thanksgiving to you Allen..... This is beautiful I also wan to thank you for all your encouragement while I was at AD. LP |
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| Reviewed by Star Craft | 11/24/2004 |
| ha a very and profound "silence" type quality I didthink Allen, ty Al | |
| Reviewed by Eileen Tiger Lily | 11/24/2004 |
| J allen a heartfelt beauty, and how well I know this feeling for tonight I feel it especially strong as I seem to be more steeped in meories of those lost than usual. I'm allowing the spirit of lost ones to visit since there is such a pull on my spirit, but I do feel drained.Sorry, but your poem caught me in this mood.May you and yours have a blessed and Happy Thanksgiving day! | |
