Welcome To By The Book By J.Allen Wilson

What sadness to this lowly form doth prevail,
for deficient are the rays of hope which come

neutered from within times hidden veil.
Collapsing now of hearts sound and true ,
granting unto the darkness

the fading dreams which once did soothe.

Oh, how shall I say,

That our time should not be this way
for I Cannot deal with this sting any more,
nor can I revive hope from the fleeting shore,
for lost am I, cast into a stormy sea
left to drown in blackness

formed by clouds of infirmity.
Yet strong must I be,
as in the company of others...my strength they must see,
alas though in the quiet of my silent night,
I shall suffer my longing, unto myself,

and when no one is looking

I softly…in my silent night…cry.

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Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph	12/9/2004

I softly…in my silent night…cry. Very touching. Well written.




Reviewed by Robert Jude(Ace) Forese	11/19/2004

when we remain strong its glow flows unto everything about us ... hopefully soon you will again cry tears of joy ...




Reviewed by Dawn Richerson	11/19/2004

Allen, this poem felt like an angel's wings enfolding me. I hope, in the writing and through the tears, you felt something close to that. My prayers are with you in your silent nights. Take care, Dawn




Reviewed by Kate Clifford	11/19/2004

Hugs. It isn't easy is it? Great write!




Reviewed by Ed Matlack	11/19/2004

I await each day, To see what my friend Al will say, I hope he is feeling the suns ray, Keeping him happy all the way... But apparently that is not the case with this tear jerker of a poem, Al, I truly hope you are well & honestly NOT crying ever...Find Peace, Ed & Rufuz (thanks for comments when you get the chance ;)]




Reviewed by Southern Horizons	11/19/2004

Allen, You've shown strength that others never will. For it takes amazing strength to face your demons, not only face them but challenge them to duel. Truly an exceptional write. Lisa




Reviewed by Mary Rose	11/19/2004

This is so sad, yet, one must wonder how those who are set apart as the strong survive without crying a little. M.Rose




Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU	11/19/2004

"My Silent Night" clears thoughts and inspires one on the persevering feelings to understanding of life's teachings. I have learned from this major art's composition, "My Silent Night". I would list this one within Your top ten works. Thank You, Poet! Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU




Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger	11/18/2004

Allen, you have described the silent suffering of so many through this timeless write, my friend. It is an absolute treasure, and I am truly saddened that you feel this much pain. You have so much to offer this world. May the gentle winds of the Creator’s grace always comfort and keep you and yours safe throughout your travels through time and space. Take good care and be well.




Reviewed by Eileen Tiger Lily	11/18/2004

J Allen this rips my heart and tears my eyes. such beauty of verse to cover the sadness, how like the situation you describe, amazing isn't it!Keep writing. You are in my thoughts and prayers!